ken master

name: ken masters

Age: 199

Visual Age: 23

Gender: Male

Division: 6th division

Personality: totally laid back with a big mouth. it takes alot to piss him off, but when he gets pissed, move out of my way.

Appearance: he look like ken masters from street fighters, but my hair isnt as long, my komono has ripped off sleeves and he have a hood on the back of it. basiclly just one gaint hoodie.

History/Background: in the world of the living he was a master chef. living the life with my restaurant and making great money, than one day some jerk held up my place and the leader of the group shot me. after awaking in the rokan district, he quickly found my way to the seirita, and enrolled, im not that great at kidos, but i can use almost any one, my kendo skills are pretty great. he soon found my way to the 6th division.

Add more history.. That's what I recommend..

yea more history and change it from 1st person to 3rd person form instead of me put he or him or ken

then i will look it over and aprove you or not